Ok, I almost forgot how to use this, it's been so long! So as some people know, i have started writing a new Story Serial, more info later when I can tell u, but i just wanted to share with you an excerpt from the first chapter (which i should probably finish) that I am particularly proud of. I admit it is vary vague as far as descriptions go but i tried to not get so caught up on that and this was my result, please enjoy:
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I turned to see the blazing fire decimating the once nearly flawless looking
school. The Fire was
massive and seemed to sway majestically, I knew that if I
went in there I would most likely die within
the flames, but I had to go in.
She was still in there, trapped. She needed me.
I ran straight at the flames passing through with relative ease. inside it
was strange, nothing was
burned. It was as if the fire couldn't burn the inside,
or the fire hasn't ruined this place yet. Whichever
it was, I had to be on my
guard.
the halls were cold, freezing even. I could feel the temperature drop as the
seconds rolled on. I heard a voice crying out in pain.
I took off running towards the source as if the fire was chasing after me,
suddenly I stopped. This hall, it was blazing hot. Literally. The fire had
consumed most of this space, it surrounded and seeped out from the doors and
spread sporadically in the hall.
She cried out again.
Like a foolish hero, I made my way through the fire and towards a door that
was not yet entirely engulfed by flame. I could see her on the other side, the
panic on her face. I told her to step away from the door, I backed up and ran
straight at the door. I thought that I would have slammed into the door before
busting it down, instead I passed right through it and fell on the ground in
the room.
I stood up and looked around, she was nowhere in sight. I walked towards the
windows. somehow, they were intact, I could see the flames engulfing the
building and the people watched me with horror yet none dared to move. Something
compelled me to put my hand on the glass. my hand seared with pain but I
couldn't pull it away. I felt my skin burn like paper. I screamed in agony until
finally my hand detached itself from the glass.
The skin on my hand looked ashen, In some areas on it I could see bone. I got
up, making my way towards the door and tried the doorknob, no such luck. I
peered through the glass on the door, She was standing on the other side, She
looked at me with a blank stare. I asked her to let me out. she let a smile
dance across her face for a brief second and turned away.
At that moment, the fire behind the windows blew through the glass. I
screamed after her, yelling at her to come back. the fire spread around the
room. I could feel it surrounding me, it edged closer snapping at my ankles. I
tried to yell at the top of my lungs but no sound came out. I pounded at the
door as the fire climbed up my legs. Frantic, I clawed at the door, finally
feeling the suffocating smoke. My eyes shut tight, the fire enveloped me and I
screamed like hell.
5 years ago
